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Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language . Do you tink this is a positive or negative social development ?

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In the contemporary world, each country has its own
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 but scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same
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 affects social development
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 The following essay takes a look at both sides of the arguments: Positive and negative
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, let us take a look at the positive, if in the future
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 we will speak the same
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 will have a lot of benefit for education and something of access to information
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 all people of the world can search, learn and understand everything
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 it doesn't take a lot of time to translate the different
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 will be convenient for diplomacy between contrasting countries. And facilitate international activities ranging from tourism to commerce.
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 will result in fewer misunderstandings caused by dissimilarities in dialects
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 a global village in which people can live in harmony
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 But on the one hand
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 it is worth considering
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 a
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 represents a local people's way of thinking and way of life as well as the history of the region where the
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 So
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 if humanity - all people of the world will speak global
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 that some countries will deal with the disappearance of minor
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 - cause the loss of customs
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 festival and social norms
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 demolish cultural diversity
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 which creates the richness in human's life.
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 ) . Almost young people in Vietnam favoured them and neglect locally cultural
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 From my point of view
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 we should connect with contrasting counties
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 but still keep our cultural. In concluding, it has a minor benefit as compared the negatives associated with it.
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