Nowadays, an increasing number of people choose to live a single life instead of getting married. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantage?

There is a fact that the proportion of women who want to become celibates has increased in recent years despite of choosing to get married. From what I felt in down-to-earth observations and practical evaluations, I believe that the benefits of it outnumber the drawbacks. It is indisputable that being celibacy without partners and parents can absolutely create a number of misfortunes. The

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drawback is that singles must undergo the negative emotions that are consequences of

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feeling loneliness. If a person orientate that the decision of living alone without a partner and family is extremely appropriate, it likes isolation rather than independence. One more disadvantage that I noticed was the lack of self-protection that made singles easily become objects of surveillance by criminals. Some criminals

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at people who are single with no

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and conduct property theft.

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, thefts usually take place in their whereabouts.

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, I agree that it can bring several significant advantages for people’s lives. There are two main reasons why they are approved

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of all, they could have more and more leisure time for hobbies.

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enriches singles’ lives as they comprehend passion and the worth of themselves to

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their set goals. The more free time they take, the more opportunities they have for their talents in the different fields.

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, on a wider level I believe that celibates can be completely independent in finance. To illustrate, a couple usually wastes a lot of money eating at

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a restaurant

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in the dating or preparing a special gift for

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lovers

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on their anniversaries and birthday; meanwhile, single people consume daily living expenses for only them. All in all, I want to confirm again that there are so many benefits of the tendency to be single, they outnumber the drawbacks.