Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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It is true that today’s children are the future of the country, and the way we bring

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them will determine the nation’s success.

Although

some believe mandatory parental training may enhance the parenting skills of individuals, I personally disagree with

this

due to some reasons which will be mentioned below.

Firstly

, it is an undeniable fact that parents play a significant role in bringing up their children, which has been

successfully

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successful

in practice since the evolution of human beings. Parenting skills will be learned by

themself

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

with

experience

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the experience

experiences

of success and failure with the children. To explain it

further

, parents

learns

Suggestion

learn

better way of bringing up children by their own childhood experiences, with

help

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the help

of their family members

Accept space

friends or even

neighbors

a person who lives (or is located) near another

neighbours

rather than getting into courses to learn how to bring up.

Hence

, it is clear that parents become well informed about how to bring up their children in a valuable and experienced way.

Moreover

, today’s parents face a challenging situation since the work full

time

and could hardly spend

time

with the children and like the past generations. Enrolling in parenting courses would bring only theoretical knowledge, whereas by spending ample

time

with

children many

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children, many

parents could get better exposure to the real life situations. In the agricultural communities of the past, many parents had more

time more

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time, more

than 10 children;

however

, they successfully bring up their children without any external support it in trainings. They could spend plenty

time

with their kids. While mingling with children, parents get a deeper understanding regarding them, and

this

realisation would enhance the parenting skills.

Therefore

, it would be meaningless to engage in parenting parental training programs, and it is recommended to utilise valuable

time

with children. To conclude, compulsory parenting lessons will be an unjustifiable act, whereas evidences have shown that parenting skills are inherited and learned from past generations and even by bringing by being with the children.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

321 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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