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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. • comics • books • radio • television • film • theatre Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Communication media
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Communication, media
plays
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play
 a vital role in today’s
world
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. It enables us to stay informed of the happenings in the entire
world
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, provides access to real-time
information
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, and entertains us. There are different kinds of media in use today, namely comics, books,
radio
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, television, film, theatre etc.
out
away from home
Out
 of these, the most effective are the television,
radio
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 and books. Television, or
TV
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 for short, is an electronic device that enables us to see and listen at the same time to an act that has been recorded. These can be replayed any number of times. News on a
TV
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 enables us to view the current events occurring in different parts of the
world
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. Video of an event can be telecasted live as it happens through remote satellite links. A
TV
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 can
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 be a source of education and entertainment. Educational channels,
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 as Discovery channel, telecast several interesting programs on topics
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 as wildlife or solar system. Other channels,
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 as Star movies, telecast movies throughout the day. A
radio
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 is an electronic device that uses
microwave
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microwaves
communication
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 to send and receive
information
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. Unlike a
TV
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, a
radio
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 cannot display an image or a video, and the
communication
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 is limited to voice only. Typically, a
radio
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 is used
for
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to
 access
information
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such
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 as news and live traffic updates. The
information
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 is conveyed on fixed bands of microwave frequency called channels. A user can set the frequency of the
radio
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 to access a particular channel. Books are the one of the oldest kind of
communication
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 medium. A
book
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 typically consists of several pages, made from wood pulp bound together. A
book
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 is typically identified by a title and an author, and optionally an ISBN number which identifies a
book
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 uniquely. A
book
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 usually contains a material on a given topic, divided by sub-topics in
form
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the form
 of chapters. Books are often classified by genre, which is a theme in which the topic can be classified. Examples of genres include fiction, non-fiction, science fiction, mystery etc. Of all the
communication
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 media available today, television,
radio
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 and books are the most important and effective ones. These are
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 the most commonly used media in the
world
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 today and they are responsible for binding the
world
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 together.

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