More and more students at university today are not choosing to study science. Why is this happening? What are the effects of this?

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Most
students
at university nowadays rarely choose
science
faculty. There are more reasons why no
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this
subject.
This
issue occurs cause in Thailand at the current no enough salary and welfare. Decreasing
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science
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of science
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can reduce the
worker
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who
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this
role.
This
essay will consider
this
point. Currently, many
students
who will
study
college do not select
science
. First of all, learners who
study
science
must have good scores to enter college.
Therefore
,
this
condition makes
students
study
hard and spend money a lot to take extra tutorial classes.
Science
faculty spends time
to
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learning more than other majors.
Moreover
, Scientists, doctors or engineers do not have good salaries and welfare.
Next,
more
students
choose other subjects because it is easy to find careers and
study
not hard.
For example
, social socializing in the future, possibly makes easy work and money,
such
as blogger, drop shipper and online.
In addition
, postgraduate
students
do not work
with
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science
,
it
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can increase
people
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in
this
career. It can have many problems,
for example
, Thailand and other countries encounter issues about viruses.
Thus
, doctors and scientists are important for helping and protecting citizens.
To conclude
, it can be seen that there are many reasons why nowadays more
students
do not choose
science
to
study
. As mentioned above, sciences are difficult to learn and spend more time than other
major
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. Welfare and salary are not worth studying when compared with other occupations. The government should pay attention to
this
condition because
this
career is essential for the country.
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