Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that the stability of a job is more important than satisfaction.

Although

the

first

reaction to some people is to agree with

such

claims.

Nevertheless

, there are persuasive reasons to refute

this

statement. In the following paragraphs, there are a number of reasons to discuss both sides of

this

issue more in-depth.

Firstly

, the main reason for having a permanent job is because a family needs to have a stable income. Take my friend, Tina,

for example

, her parents are dancers. They enjoy their dancing performance.

Nonetheless

, their salaries are unstable,

hence

, Tina and her siblings could not be able to study at a university. Even though they got good grades in their senior high school. From

such

examples, it demonstrates that job security is a big deal for a family.

On the other hand

, some people claim that professional satisfaction is more important for younger. Since they need to find achievements for what they are doing. In that way, they will dedicate all their hearts to the works.

For instance

, my sister Jane, she is a doctor.

Although

it is quite tired and dangerous, she finds the achievements of helping others.

Consequently

, it can be said that civilians need fulfilment to motivate their energy. To conclude, it is not to say that either side of view is totally without merits.

However

, I agree with the position of satisfaction is more important. Since we spend most of our time on working, we need to be enthusiastic.

Otherwise we

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Otherwise, we

will be burned out one day.