Many people think children should not be punished at early ages. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishment may be applied for children?

There are lots of arguments about whether youngsters should be

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penalized

or they should be taught without

punishment

. Some say if they will be punished for some commitment, it will come across as a trauma in their life.

However

, others, myself included, argue that without

punishment

lessons cannot be learnt effectively. In

this

essay I will explain my idea and give some examples about what should be done as

punishment

. Having said that, children may commit any sort of crime which require some lessons to be taught. The reason behind the lesson that in their after life they will be punished for what they did and may suffer severely because of consequences

such

as monetary penalty or imprisonment. Take almost every prisoner

for instance

. If their childhood would be investigated, probably lack of family care might be understood, which is

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not to punishing

don't punish

them appropriately.

Therefore

, I strongly believe that penalizing children

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extremely important since it may prevent them to pull off worse things in the future, not to mention possible price they will pay.

Moreover

, it is crucial that how to penalize them without

cause any

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cause, any

trauma since there are lots of people who had suffered during childhood because of the parents’

punishment

.

First

of all, the main goal should be the benefit of the young one and it should not be forgotten that they are not able to disguise which is good or bad.

However

, they should learn their differences at some point.

Therefore

, as a

punishment

, the most valuable thing might be taken away from them

such

as the Internet, nowadays. Absence of very critical item would lead them to think what they have done and, in the future, when they remember that feeling, they would comprehend that

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some things

are going wrong. Another

punishment

might be cutting their pocket money off,

for example

. By doing that they,

also

, would think about possible consequences of their behaviour. To conclude,

although

youngsters may be taught as very naive to overcome any

punishment

, I totally believe that they should not be regarded as that way and should pay the prize of their doings by their pocket money or valuable things, which is mentioned above.