Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is debatable whether or not we should accept or attempt to improve an unsatisfactory

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. In my opinion,

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accepting situations in life may be pragmatic in some cases, it is still beneficial to at least strive to better the

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. On the one hand, acceptance of facts is sometimes the only way to make people feel more satisfied with their lives.

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is especially true for those who are unable to drastically change their

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, particularly if they are at war or experiencing a severe economic downturn. The best example of

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would be people living in Syria and Iraq. Considering their war conditions, it would be cruel to suggest that they should find a way to improve their lives when it might simply be impossible.

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, these people may feel to be better off by accepting that they cannot make any changes to their

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at the present moment and just focus on their own survival and that of their family.

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, I would argue that in even the most difficult

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situations, people

can make their lives better through continued effort. Instances of people who worked hard and became successful abound in both developed and developing nations. A relevant example is Yuzhu Shi, an entrepreneur who was known as “the poorest man in China” as his

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company owed millions of RMBs to the investors.

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, rather than accepting the failure and filing for bankruptcy, he took on the debt himself, learned from his previous mistakes, and restarted another business to sell health supplements. Thanks to his efforts, his

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business took off so quickly that he repaid the money in full a few years later. Now he is not only debt-free, but

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becomes a billionaire in China. To conclude, there are very few situations where it would be advisable to simply accept an unhappy

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because hard work over a long period will pay off to some degree in the vast majority of cases.