More and more people buy a range of household goods such as television, microwave, oven ,.. Do you think it positive or negative development?

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technologies

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, people’s life is now more comfortable and modern than in the past. In many countries today, people buy a range of

household

goods

such

as

television

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, microwave

oven

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and rice

cooker

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cookers

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.

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phenomenon both

have

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advantages and disadvantages, but I think it

have

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more positive effects than negative effects. The number of families that have

goods

at their

home

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has increased rapidly in the past few years. The main reason for

this

trend is because of their people’s lifestyle. They have less time to do their

household

activities and

therefor

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they are relying on their electronic devices.

For example

, the smart television allows us to connect

the

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internet and it provides more

channels

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options for entertainment than in the past.

In addition

, the rice cooker can simplify the cooking process by reducing the number of steps to have a delicious bowl of rice. Similar advantages,

the

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more free time we save to having

household

applications

and

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we are capable of doing something we like

such

as

watch

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television after a heavy day

from

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work.

On the other hand

,

the

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household

applications have some negative effects are should not be overlooked. Those devices would waste a lot of electronic power, especially air

conditioner

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and

refrigerator

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.

Moreover

, the number

household

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goods

may be one of the major problems of greater carbon dioxide emissions which triggers global

warning

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. And since the fast development of online selling, many people spend

amount

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of money

to

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buying

goods

which

is

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not as qualified as the advertisement and

event

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useless.

To sum up

,

although

some people

are arguing

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that buying

wide

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range of

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household

may bring power waste and

environment

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harmful,

advantages

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technology may resolve these problems. In my opinion, I think buying

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household

is a positive development.