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complete writings It is apparent from the diagram that the whole process consists of two main parts with seven stages starting with analysis and culminating in

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The first part of the chart begins with planning and finding the information. The essays are analyzed and are given many ideas quickly.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

123 words

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the diagram illustrates how research essays are written

What are the advantages and disadvantages of taking English lessons with classmates from the same country?

Some educationalist argue that non-exam, arts-based subjects, such as music, drama, art and craft, should be compulsory in the secondary-school curriculum. They believe that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, we are producing more and nore rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced

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