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Wealthy Nations should assist poor countries with humanitarian relief during natural disaster do you agree or disagree

#nations #countries #relief #disaster
Reserve moral responsibility to help countries picture being strike the phone by natural disasters to help its citizens for their well being
this
 essay agrees to the statement because financially strong countries are able to spend their money with negligible effect on their economy
also
 these countries have abundant our services available compared to the developing ones Developing Nations have much rate of GDP these countries are mostly investing their money to grow
further
 technological on the other side poor countries are struggling for their daily needs unfortunately on
such
 countries are under unfavourable natural forces it is very intuitive
such
 circumstances will make their condition miserable for poor countries Gulf countries
also
 have plenty of other sources apart from money to help with eatables and medicines are the top most required thing during
this
 stuff time the word life is
also
 affected adversely which can affect the logical balance of the affected area so it is possible to reduce the loss if
such
 it is provided in time venue of the countries were able to survive
this
 unfavourable condition of the climate AS file and good due to the availability of sport from other countries. In conclusion i would like to say government of which countries have the capability to support countries by adding them with monetary funds along with
this
 that can share the record of resources in
such
 crucial time with the needed countries

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