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These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays
, the common feature of today's
internet
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 is that people have more social relationships with each other. Both mobile phones and the
internet
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 serve the same purpose. I believed that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. The top advantage of mobile phones and the
internet
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 is that people remain socially connected. No matter if your son or daughter is far away from you, you can always connect with them anytime. It's a tough task these days to spend time off busy schedules and socializing. Cell phones and
internet
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 serve the purpose. In
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, no matter where you are, whatever you are doing, you can always spend time and interact with your loved ones. Not just your loved ones, but you can
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 communicate with people who share your interests.
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, there are
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 some side effects of the
internet
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. The generation gap between parents and children is growing. Children mostly spend time with their children playing online games or surfing the
internet
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 while their parents are alone and lack the care of children.
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 conclusion, mobile phones and the
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 have both advantages and disadvantages and directly affect our lives. I strongly believe that they play an active role in our lives, because it is entirely up to us how to use it. Believe me, the advantages outweigh the downsides.
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