Some people think it’s better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. However, others believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending the same school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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some people believe that studying in separate

school

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for boys and girls is better, some people

thinks

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think

matching boys and girls in the same

school

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has got advantage result. I agree with the

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view and I think studying together has got more benefit.

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of all, studying in the same

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has a many benefit for boys and girls.

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that is

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learning to live together in the society. In the other word, we can't separate male and female in the society.

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school

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is a good place for learning some ability is useful in the real life.

Student

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The student

should learn how can they do in future life.

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, if one of them wants to decide to get married, and he/she doesn't have any idea about behaviour

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partner in general, it is possible to choose wrong make mistake.

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is why it is a good idea for knows them self in the

school

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as a gender.

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, some people think that it’s better if girls and boys has a special

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for different gender. One of the reasons is for focusing on the lessons.

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group

think

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thinks

is thinking

, studying in a same

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for boys and girls, doesn't help to competition between them and

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improving.

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this

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age they

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age, they

want to get

pay

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paid

attention, so try to spend a time for make nice appearance.

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as a girl who likes to do

make up

the way in which someone or something is composed

makeup

. I should mention that I

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don't agree

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idea. In conclusion, I think studying in the same

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helps boys and girls to grow up as

human

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a human

. I mean without thinking about gender. It

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helps them

for

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knowing each other as a

person how

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person, how

living in the society.

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Topic Vocabulary:

educate
benefit
attending
separate schools
boys and girls
advantages
disadvantages
eliminates
distractions
focus
studies
reduces
gender biases
stereotypes
tailored learning environment
co-ed schools
promotes
social interaction
communication skills
developing
mutual respect
understanding
real world
personal opinion
conclusion

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