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Some people believe that our happiness depends on how much money we have. Others say that money cannot buy happiness. Do you think that having money is the key to happiness, or are there more important factors?

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Most people believe that
money
 is the most important part of life to be
happiness
Suggestion
happy
happier
. While another group of people thinks that
money
 is important, but there are a
lot
 of different things to be
happiness
Suggestion
happy
. I think everybody like
money
 and the people usually spend a
lot
 of time to make more
money
. Sometimes they work for more than 12 hours. In fact, they think if you have a
lot
 of
money
 or you are rich, you can buy everything for yourself or your family. They think if they buy a big house with a
lot
 of facilities and their meal at a great restaurant, they reach to their goal. Other people prefer to have nice cars and expensive dresses. In fact, they think they are
happiness
Suggestion
happy
happier
happiest
 with these options. But
money
 cannot alone cause
happiness
. I know some rich men like actors, players and famous people that they are not happy, because they cannot have a regular life. In other hand, I think there are other reasons for
happiness
. In my opinion my
money
 is not the only aspect of
happiness
. Something like healthy is so important. In fact, if you are not healthy, you cannot enjoy about your life.
Also
, family is the most primary factor for
happiness
.
In addition
, always
money
 cannot get respect. In my view, sometimes people are
happiness
Suggestion
happy
, but they cannot see it and they look out or test other reason to be
happiness
Suggestion
happy
. They think
money
 is everything. So they they give up other things. In conclusion, if you want to be
happiness
Suggestion
happy
, you have to combine some factors like family, health, respect and
money
. So,
money
 is one of the most necessary factor of
happiness
 and it is not the only reason.
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