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More houses are needed in many countries to cope with increasing populations. Would it be better to build houses in existing towns and cities or to develop new towns in rural areas.

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With a significant growth of population size, there is a demand for more housings.
That is
 why the government wondered whether to construct new ones in available urban areas or to establish brand-new cities in a countryside.
To begin
 with the former statement, it would be definitely better for the population to fit in. Because the lifestyle of the metropolises
differ
Suggestion
differs
 from the one in rural areas.
Thus
, the state would tackle
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 problems associated with unemployment and procrastination of young generation. As big cities have
such
 features like
high degree
Suggestion
a high degree
 of learning and good vacancies.
However
, if there appeared a lot of accommodations, it would adversely affect an everyday life of citizens, due to traffic jams and overcrowding, which has already been a problem for dwellers for many years. Turning to
the the
definite article
the
 latter one, it would undeniably be a great solution for the villages and for their residents as well. The reason for
this
 is that there could be a
noticable
capable or worthy of being perceived
noticeable
 improvement in the horticulture and crop industry, as well as in many other aspects ranging from education to civilization in terms of technology. So it would
rise
raise the level or amount of something
raise
 the quality of life there. In conclusion, as it is clearly stated above, it would be superior to develop towns in
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
 so as not to create overpopulation in
downtowns
Suggestion
downtown
downtown's
.
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