The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity
The diagram represents the data
how
geothermal energy is used to manufacture Change preposition
on how
electricity
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Overall
, there are 5 stages in the whole producing Linking Words
electricity
process, beginning with the pumping down cold Use synonyms
water
and ending with the producing Use synonyms
electricity
.
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To begin
, cold Linking Words
water
is pumped down 4.5 km through Use synonyms
injection
well.Correct article usage
an injection
Following
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this
, the Linking Words
water
is implanted into the geothermal zone where hot rocks are injected into the production well .Use synonyms
Then
, the hot Linking Words
water
is pumped up to the ground through the condenser.
The Use synonyms
last
two steps are made Linking Words
in
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apply
the
above ground.First of all, the hot Correct article usage
apply
water
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is become
steam in the Change to the active voice
becomes
has become
consender
.Correct your spelling
contender
sender
Following
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this
, the steam enters Linking Words
into
the turbine and the turbine Change preposition
apply
make
it Change the verb form
makes
spin
.Add an article
a spin
Finally
, the generator, which is powered by Linking Words
turbine
, produces Add an article
a turbine
electricity
.Use synonyms
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