Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Watching movies in cinemas or on mobile phones
is
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are
a little bit controversial topic. There are some people who believe that if they can watch movies via their mobile phones so they will not be obliged to go to the cinema
,
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,
whilst others think that the experience of watching movies in cinemas is a must to be fully enjoyed. I would side wide the opinion of the necessity of going to the
movie
theater
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
. On the one hand, it cannot be denied that having your favourite movies on your phone is a privilege. People can watch them in buses or during their long trips or wherever and whenever they want. Despite of the advantage of having a smartphone full of movies and series that can be watched anywhere, but people still cannot express their impressions about these movies freely.
For example
, unlike the quiet activities that can be done during a trip by reading a book or newspaper, watching a
movie
will not be that quiet or enjoyed because people automatically express their feelings of liking or disliking loudly.
On the other hand
,
Accept space
,
nowadays people prefer going to the
movie
theater
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
to watch movies. Watching movies is more enjoyable. Modern cinemas that are designed with new techniques like 3D cinemas make the experience of watching movies worth the trial. The atmosphere in the cinema
itself
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It
Itself
makes the time of movies unforgettable.
For instance
,
Although
, I watched tons of movies with my uncle at home before he had travelled abroad, I still remember those that we watched in the
movie
house because each one is considered unforgettable happy memory. In conclusion, owing to the internet and smart phones that makes it accessible for everyone to watch films everywhere and anywhere. From my prespective, I strongly believe that watching movies at drive-in has a special taste that cannot be replaced with mobile's watching
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