The bar chart below shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three different countries between 2007 and 2010
These data sources clearly
communicates
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communicate
that
the changes in real estate values in three different nations over the period of three years.
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Overall
, while
there was an upward trend in the prices of property in China
, a downward trend could be seen in the
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Algeria
and Argentina
's figures. It is also
noticeable that the figure for China
experienced the
enormous growth and Correct article usage
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Algeria
's percentage showed the opposite trend.
In 2007, the prices of property in Algeria
was
the highest cost, at over 6.0%, compared with Correct subject-verb agreement
were
China
and Argentina
with only 2.0% and above 3.0% respectively. In the following year, China
and Argentina
witnessed the
slight decrease, up to 4.2% and nearly 5% individually. Correct article usage
a
By contrast
, Algeria
's rate had a slight lull, from above 6.0 in 2007 to only 4.5% in 2008.
From 2009 to 2010, China
experienced a constant rise in its rate and reached a peak of nearly 7.0% in
the end of the period, Change the preposition
at
whereas
Argentina
's proportion showed a significant drop by roughly 4% in 2009 before increased
slightly again to 2,6% in 2010. The percentage of Wrong verb form
increasing
Algeria
's property value dropped slightly by 0.1% and ended at 3.0% in 2010.Submitted by monikahuynh152 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, algeria, argentina with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 4 times.
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