Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter you should, Tell him you name and where are you living Describe the problem Suggest what you want him to do for it

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Dear sir, I am Megha Mehta, resident of Amrapali apartment, Bodakdev. I am writing
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letter to draw your attention
towards
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the damaged road in my locality.
Since
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few years, people prefer
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area for living and
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is because of better living
standard
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and amenities.
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, there are many construction
work
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is going on. Actually, the problem started to appear
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year when
construction
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the construction
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of
apartment
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the apartment
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started
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besides
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my home. All heavy vehicles carrying building materials passed through the nearby street. It created a pathetic situation that people are unable to walk and drive.
Initially
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,
builder
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the builder
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promised to repair the road after the completion of his project, but, he has not done anything so far. So, I kindly request you to build the road again or file a
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against the builder on behalf of us. Look forward
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your positive response. Yours sincerely, Megha Mehta
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Grievance
  • Deterioration
  • Hazardous
  • Impede
  • Inconvenience
  • Potholes
  • Cracks
  • Collapsed
  • Uneven
  • Detour
  • Repair
  • Maintenance
  • Investigation
  • Infrastructure
  • Expenditure
  • Resolution
  • Improvement
  • Community
  • Resident
  • Safety
  • Convenience
  • Traffic congestion
  • Civic
  • Enquiry
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