The graph shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.
These data sources clearly
communicates
the Change the verb form
communicate
consumption
of three categories of food (meat
, salt and fish
) in China over the 25-year period.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in the amount of meat
and fish
produced, a
downward trend could be seen in Correct word choice
and a
the
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apply
fish
production. It is also
noticeable that fish
was the popular food choice over the period shown.
In 1985, around 600 grams
fish
was consumed by Change preposition
of fish
Chineses
per person per week, which was six times higher than that of Correct your spelling
Chinese
meet's
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meeting's
comsumption
, at only 100 Correct your spelling
consumption
grams
per person per week, while
the percentage of the consumption
of salt was slighly
lower, at around 500 Correct your spelling
slightly
grams
. After a decade, the figure for fish
consumption
dropped by 100 grams
, from 700 grams
in 1990 to around 600 grams
in 1995, followed by meat
and fish
consumption
, with the figure being roughly 150 grams
and 350 grams
individually.
In comparison, from 1995 to 2010, fish's
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fish
consumption
saw a gradual increase, with the figure reaching a peak of nearly 850 grams
per person per week, while
the proportion of meat
consumed increased moderately by 50 grams
, from 150 grams
in 1995 to 200 grams
at the end
of the period. The trend for salt was noticeable
different from those described above, it experienced a Change the word
noticeably
steadily
fall, with the percentage being 280 Change the word
steady
grams
and standing at approximately 200 grams
in 2010.Submitted by monikahuynh152 on
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