Nowadays plastic money replacements such as credit and debit cards are extremely popular, even more than banknotes and coins. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages?

These days, the
plasticcurrency
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plastic currency
is replacing the old ways of
cash
transfer, modern ways,
such
ascredit
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as credit
and debit cards well-liked. In
this
essay, I will discuss the pros
andcons
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and cons
of having plastic
money
and will provide a logical conclusion.  
To begin
with, plastic
money
is easier
tocarry
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to carry
and it is much more secure than paper currency.
In other words
, as it
isjust
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is just
a
card
, it is much more convenient to move from place to place
withoutworrying
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without worrying
about it, and
also
the probability of theft will reduce as it
requiresa
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requires a
password to withdraw the
cash
. To cite an example, one of my friend's
walletwas
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wallet was
stolen and he lost some
cash
, but the
money
in his account was safe
andlater
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and later
he found his master
card
with no damage at the police station. So, it
isclear
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is clear
that new ways of barter system provide an extra layer of protection. 
on
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On
the
otherhand
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other hand
, it is more sophisticated and involves complex procedures. What I mean is
,
Accept space
,
to have a credit
card
one must have a bank account and he should provide
thenecessary
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the necessary
requirements for the same, to change the pin or the passcode of
thecredit
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the credit
card
people have to follow along and tiring process.
for
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For
instance, in
astudy
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a study
, it was found, 64 percent of people who have credit cards suffer when
theydon't
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they don't
remember the security key or pin of the
card
.
Moreover
, older
generationsfind
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generations find
it hard to read the important clauses which come with theses cards
andoften
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and often
seek real
cash
transfer. 
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To encapsulate
,
card
money
transfer is a modern way of
money
management,
althoughit
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although it
has its own disadvantages.
However
, I believe the positive aspects of
thismethod
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this method
outweigh its negative aspects. People should adopt
this
plasticmoney which
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plastic money, which
plastic money which
is hassle-free and have more security.
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