Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experince and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Almost everybody believes that a h
ight-
greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount
high
paid job comes from completing
education
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without considering what is the most important way f
or
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to
work about graduated and expert staff. Since our birth, we have learnt
education
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and different kinds of open-air i
tems whether
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items, whether
they are hard or easy and whether they are big or small in order to gain a higher position one day.In fact, all of these are for our future hope.
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, we prepare ourselves all-around about investing in strong resource. It is meant that
education
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and p
rcatical
concerned with actual use or practice
practical
learning which combine as one to become our coming job. Without any down-to-earth experience, a job can be run by formal
education
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.
That is
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not so hard for ordinary workers. In many countries, particularly undeveloped and developing nations, that system i
s
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are
the most common in managing and running their organizations, their c
omapnies
an institution created to conduct business
companies
and their s
ocialities.
an asset of special worth or utility
specialities
societies
By doing so, it is known that there is not so different
by comparison
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with developed countries across the world.But that does not point out that experiences and soft skill are useless at all. On the one hand every employee or worker should be ignored,
e
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,
specially s
killful
having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
skilful
stuff with uneducated parts, especially about graduation.Nowadays, every board, every director and every manager i
s
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are
willing to invite
such
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workers as VIP because they are able to assist and handle most problems more for their companies to stand long enough in the long run.To e
xamplify,
be characteristic of
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the co-founder and CEO at Tesla, Elon Musk said " I open the door to those who are s
killful
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in computer fields even though they are u
ndergraduation"
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. In my personal opinion, both ways sound perfect if possible, but the latter is prioritised more in the event that someone has to choose either.
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