Writing task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic: Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, In
development
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developing
world to animals effect losing some kind of valuable resources of animals in the world. What do we do against
this
danger, people are changed way of
life
.
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with
examples.
First
of all,
this
fact is true, people try to
keeps
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keep
animals kinds vanish taken to
ahead
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a head
of precious resources from the planet. There are the main rules for
animals safety
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the animals' safety
animals' safety
animal safety
animal's safety
and
much
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many
places are isolated for living animals and so much convenience have keeping of animals. Every
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country
are accepted
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is accepted
important rules animals
is
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are
disappearance valuable resources to all animals in the areas.
However
, Some people are killed taken to pleasure and their things take for
ornament
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ornament, such
such
as teeth
,
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,
skin and
ekspanat
. Again others are hunting it can be changed traditional habit. I think that animals don't wake dangerous and vanish
animals
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animal
species
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connects a noun with the preceding word
of
valuable resources, per people need protect and make a
special
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speciality
of places for living as well as they need to accretion more and more with partners. In
currently
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currencies
, the forests are added more line, and the negatives leave waves
as a
result many
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result, many
birds are dangers and they are killed, the people are decreased of waves as a reason electricity
companies
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company
leave
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leaves
dangers waves of birds ways are
misleads
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misleading
and they are killed
to
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for
losing of ways. And in my opinion,
this
is usually checking to
left
raise from a lower to a higher position
lift
wages from electricity companies. To sum up,
the animals of
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the life of animals
life
is
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are
keeping connected
too
in the direction of
to
our
life
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lives
,
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,
so people are
safed
rescued; especially from the power and consequences of sin
saved
every
animals
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animal
of valuable
life
. 260 words

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