The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The several changes that had taken place on
an
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island
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are illustrated in the two images, thanks to the development in tourism. The basic structure of the
island
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both before and after the construction of any tourist facilities is a 100-metre strip of land with a beach in the West. It can be clearly seen from the pictures that from an empty area, the
island
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had been covered with tourism constructions in the central and to the west; meanwhile, the structure seemed unchanged to the East. In the central area, a reception was being built and surrounded by a vehicle track, which led to a restaurant in the Northern and a pier for sailboats in the opposite direction. Directly to the right and across the North-South East track was a series of 9 shelters built on a circular footpath. Beside the reception to the left rose up 6 houses served for accommodation. From the pattern, circling these houses, a path for walkers was linked to the beach. After the changes in construction, activities like swimming were organized along the
western most
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point of the
island
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.

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