The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The maps compare
road
access to a hospital in the 3-year period from 2007 to 2010 which was changed with the reconstruction of the main
road
. As
it
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can be seen on the first map, there was one main
road
(Hospital
road
) leading straight to the city hospital. On the right hand of
this
road
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there was a car park for both staff and
public
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the public
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in 2007. On the left hand of the Hospital
road
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,road
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there was nothing back in 2007
comparing
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with a bus station in 2010. Looking more closely at the maps, we can see that the Hospital
road
was changed in 2010 by
building
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of
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two roundabouts which were connected with the bus station. One of them was at the cross of the Ring
road
and the Hospital
road
in the North. The other one was at the cross of the City
road
and the Hospital
road
in the South. The parking area to the East of the main
road
did not change
it's
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location but
this
car park
transformed
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for staff only. Whilst the public could leave their automobiles on
a
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new parking to the East of the city hospital.
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Linking words: Add some linking words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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