The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The maps compare
road
access to a hospital in the 3-year period from 2007 to 2010 which was changed with the reconstruction of the main road
.
As it
can be seen on the first map, there was one main Correct pronoun usage
apply
road
(Hospital road
) leading straight to the city hospital. On the right hand of this
road
there was a car park for both staff and Add a comma
,road
public
in 2007. On the left hand of the Hospital Correct article usage
the public
road
there was nothing back in 2007 Add a comma
,road
comparing
with a bus station in 2010.
Looking more closely at the maps, we can see that the Hospital Wrong verb form
compared
road
was changed in 2010 by building
Add an article
the building
of
two roundabouts which were connected with the bus station. One of them was at the cross of the Ring Change preposition
apply
road
and the Hospital road
in the North. The other one was at the cross of the City road
and the Hospital road
in the South.
The parking area to the East of the main road
did not change it's
location but Replace the word
its
this
car park transformed
for staff only. Whilst the public could leave their automobiles on Add a missing verb
was transformed
a
new parking to the East of the city hospital.Remove the article
apply
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