The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home to work, shopping and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is certainly true

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necessary to minimize the movement of people from

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for

work

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, education or shopping in order to reduce the

traffic

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in cities. I completely agree with

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idea and

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think

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important to reduce hospital appointments, these measures will reduce the

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congestion and have a positive impact on the planet. It is obvious that

traffic

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congestion is a big problem in our society and it will be beneficial if people can

work

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, study and shop from

home

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. There are a lot studies that prove

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the high efficiency

home

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office, which allow people to do their

work

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activities from

home

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and reduce the

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in rush hours. Education is

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important, schools and universities could adopt online classes in order to reduce the

traffic

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. Students will not need to travel long distances in rush hours to get on time to their classes. It is

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true that shopping centres concentrate a lot of cars in the nearby.

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is necessary to do online shopping and

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a delivery guy

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will send

items to people´s

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. There are other options to reduce the amount of cars in roads,

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instance doctors

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instance, doctors

could give online appointments to their patients,

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practice will allow lower fluency of people in

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the hospital

and only real sick people have to be there. A big positive aspect of these ideas is the reduction of gas emissions to the atmosphere, if people don’t use their cars there will be not contamination

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the planet. In conclusion, in order to regulate the

traffic

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in cities is necessary to reduce the need for people to travel for

work

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, education and shopping and hospitals,

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method will have a positive impact on the planet and will reduce the vehicle congestion.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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297 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Commuting patterns
Remote work
Telecommuting
E-learning platforms
E-commerce
Urban planning
Public transportation
Infrastructure development
Green spaces
Pedestrianization
Carbon footprint
Sustainable living
Carpooling
Cycle lanes
Mixed-use development
Teleconference
Urban sprawl
Zoning regulations
Traffic congestion
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The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home to work, shopping and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.