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Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit making companies. Do you think the disadvantage of private health care outweigh the advantages.

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Experts throughout both developing and developed nations often debate, whether health care systems should be regulated by the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
, or private companies are more capable of providing better medical facilities to public. Personally, I am strongly convinced that, the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 is In
this
 essay, I shall discuss a number of ways in which services provided by
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 institutions are more
benefical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
 to people.
To begin
 with, many medical facilities offered by these private health institutions, are far beyond the affordable range of many people,
espically
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
 for those, who belongs to
low socio economic background
Suggestion
the low socioeconomic background
low socioeconomic background
.
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