The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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Nowdays
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Now days
many people prefer to do online shopping rather than going to market. May be in future online shopping take
palace
a point located with respect to surface features of some region
place
to shops in
cities
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the cities
.
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.
I do not agree with
this
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point
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However there
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However, there
are many sites for online shopping like amazon,
flipkart
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,
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,
safe shop and many others
.
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.
Many people buy things from there
.
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.
And these
markete
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markets
market
are rapidly
increse
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increased, although
increased although
although
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people go to
markets but
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markets, but
some people who are working in colleges and companies they are not able to go market for every little
things
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thing
they prefer to do online shopping and save
there
of them or themselves
their
time
.
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.
If they need some
grocries
a marketplace where groceries are sold
groceries
they make order place and get there
nesseries
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nes series
things easily. According to me online shoppin
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has not demolished
doesn't demolish
does not demolish
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h markets sho
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markets, shops
market shops
market market shops
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decrease in size, extent, or range
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depress
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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