The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
The bar chart below illustrates information about the total number of
minutes
of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three types in 7 Use synonyms
years
from 1995 to 2002.
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phone calls in Britain in three different sections: Correct article usage
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mobiles
, national and international, and local.
It is clear from the bar chart that the local type accounted Fix the agreement mistake
mobile
highest
rate in all 7 Change the article
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years
. In 1999, the number of Use synonyms
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local calls took the highest proportion with 90 Correct article usage
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billion
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minutes
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1997, 1998 and 2000 the Fix the agreement mistake
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amount
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public
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the public
a public
call
was high with 85, 89 and 83 Fix the agreement mistake
calls
minutes
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local was in low percentage with 72 Correct article usage
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billion
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for 1996 and 2001.
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billion
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60
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38
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and 38
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years
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9
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