The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
The bar chart below illustrates information about the total number of
minutes
of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three types in 7 years
from 1995 to 2002.
Overall
, the graph demonstrates data about the total of
time of Change preposition
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the
phone calls in Britain in three different sections: Correct article usage
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mobiles
, national and international, and local.
It is clear from the bar chart that the local type accounted Fix the agreement mistake
mobile
highest
rate in all 7 Change the article
the highest
years
. In 1999, the number of the
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minutes
of the
local calls took the highest proportion with 90 Correct article usage
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billion
minutes
. In the year
1997, 1998 and 2000 the Fix the agreement mistake
years
amount
of time for public
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the public
a public
call
was high with 85, 89 and 83 Fix the agreement mistake
calls
minutes
respectively. The amount
of the
local was in low percentage with 72 Correct article usage
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billion
minutes
for 1995 and 2002, 79
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and 79
billion
minutes
for 1996 and 2001.
Turning to 2 rest of the sections, the more years
were, the more calls were. In 2002, the calls had highest
proportion with 62 Change the article
the highest
billion
minutes
for national call
and 40 Fix the agreement mistake
calls
billion
for mobiles
. From 1995 to 2001, the amount
of the
calls Correct article usage
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were
high with 50, 56, Change the verb form
was
60
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and 60
billion
minutes
for national calls and 10, 21, 38
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and 38
billion
minutes
for mobiles
. These
rest of the Correct determiner usage
The
years
were in low amount
with 2, 4, 6,Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
9
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and 9
billion
minutes
for mobiles
and 39, 41, 45, 49
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and 49
billion
minutes
for national calls.Submitted by pphh.ntt.hn on
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