Some People claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Many individuals
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that wastage from home is not recycled properly. They said
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government
Suggestion
the government
should make it a legal requirement.
Personally I
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Personally, I
agree with
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point
government
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should take a step and
also
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government
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need the support from citizens for recycling
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However many
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However, many
of folks can't take it
serious
Suggestion
seriously
because of them recycling is properly not overcome If
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government
Suggestion
the government
make
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makes
a
law there
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law, there
are
plethora
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a plethora
of masses who follow
this
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way and help in recycling. And I think
this
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law plays an indispensable role in recycling
.
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.
Although
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people follow
this
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recycling is very helpful for world we can make electricity from recycling we get gas.
In conclusion
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conclusion, government
government
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laws are mandatory
if
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the government
governme
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nt m
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makes
ake law folks are in pressure to do it

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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