The table below shows the primary funding sources of international students in the US during the years 2003/04 and 2013/14. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer describing the data and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the primary funding sources of international students in the US during the

years 2003/04 and 2013/14. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer describing the data

and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table provides information about 5 categories of primary sources of funding to forget students in America between 2003/04 and 2013/14.
Overall
,
it is clear that
international
students’s
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sponsorship came from personal and family, U.S college, Foreign government, Current Employer, and other sources over the ten years period. It is noticeable that the total
of
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funding witnessed a
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increase
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2003/04 and 2013/14, from 572,509 to 886,052.
While
the proportion of primary funding
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other sources in the US reached the bottom, at -14%
at
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the same period. Both Personal and Family and US College or University saw the first
nd
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second
biggest increase in the number of
overseas
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student
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during ten years period, starting at 2003/04, by about 100,000 and approximately 50,000, respectively.
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, Foreign government or University and Current
Employer
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obtained a vast percentage change, with 383% and 390%, sequentially.
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