The table below shows the primary funding sources of international students in the US during the years 2003/04 and 2013/14. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer describing the data and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table provides information about 5 categories of primary sources of funding to forget students in America between 2003/04 and 2013/14.
Overall
, it is clear that
international students’s
sponsorship came from personal and family, U.S college, Foreign government, Current Employer, and other sources over the ten years period.
It is noticeable that the total Remove the s
students’
of
funding witnessed a Change preposition
apply
significantly
increase Change the adverb
significant
during
2003/04 and 2013/14, from 572,509 to 886,052. Change preposition
between
While
the proportion of primary funding of
other sources in the US reached the bottom, at -14% Change preposition
from
at
the same period.
Both Personal and Family and US College or University saw the first Change preposition
in
nd
Correct your spelling
and
second
biggest increase in the number of overseas
Add an article
the overseas
an overseas
student
during ten years period, starting at 2003/04, by about 100,000 and approximately 50,000, respectively. Change to a plural noun
students
Similarly
, Foreign government or University and Current Employer
obtained a vast percentage change, with 383% and 390%, sequentially.Fix the agreement mistake
Employers
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