The following two pia charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in1985 and in 1995.
The given two pie charts illustrate how many leisure
activities
are popular in
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among
the
European adult in 1985 and 1995.
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Overall
, we can clearly see that leisure activities
were popular at all periods, between
European adults, particularly watching Change preposition
among
tv
and appeared recently year, playing computer games.
If we look at the given details, both in 1985 and in 1995 talking with friends, watching TV
and such
like
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activities
were popular. In 1985 talking with friends equalled 21%, watching TV
32%. In 1995 talking with friends increased a bit, but watching TV
exception
for it Replace the word
except
with
30%. Change preposition
by
Additionally
, we can see joining new
activity, which is playing computer games in 1995 and it equalled 27% that year. But other Add an article
the new
activities
equalled the least percentages, particularly, in 1995.
In 1995 taking with family decreases
three times less than in 1985 and Wrong verb form
decreased
this
point it equalled 7%. And Change preposition
at this
also
eating out decreased about
three times less than in 1985. And that activity was 23% in 1985. Other Change preposition
by about
activities
like undertaking with family and eating out. Namely, in 1985 was 6%, in 1995 was 2% which other activities
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