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The following two pia charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in1985 and in 1995.

The following two pia charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in1985 and in 1995.
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The given two pie charts illustrate how many leisure
activities
 are popular
in
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the
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European adult in 1985 and 1995.
Overall
, we can clearly see that leisure
activities
 were popular at all periods,
between
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 European adults, particularly watching
tv
 and appeared recently year, playing computer games. If we look at the given details, both in 1985 and in 1995 talking with friends, watching
TV
 and
such
like
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activities
 were popular. In 1985 talking with friends equalled 21%, watching
TV
 32%. In 1995 talking with friends increased a bit, but watching
TV
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 for it
with
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 30%.
Additionally
, we can see joining
new
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 activity, which is playing computer games in 1995 and it equalled 27% that year. But other
activities
 equalled the least percentages, particularly, in 1995. In 1995 taking with family
decreases
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 three times less than in 1985 and
this
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 point it equalled 7%. And
also
 eating out decreased
about
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 three times less than in 1985. And that activity was 23% in 1985. Other
activities
 like undertaking with family and eating out. Namely, in 1985 was 6%, in 1995 was 2% which other
activities
.
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