You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear sir, I am a student of “advanced business management” a part-time course in your institute. The main endeavour of writing
letter is to inform you that I am not able to continue my course
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term due to my office work assignments. Please allow me to explain it briefly. I am doing a full-time job in ‘supreme Infosys’ in the city, Ludhiana but, recently my company has opened a new branch in city Jalandhar which is 210 km away from there. Due to
, they shifted some employees to the new branch and they promoted me as an “HR Manager” there. So it is quite difficult for me to travel daily
a long distance.
, my new job requires more work and more time as well,
, I want to hold
course for
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session. I hope you will understand my situation and I wish to join it again in the
term, so could you please adjust my current payment in
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session if possible. If it is not practicable for you
please refund my fees as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you. yours faithfully, Jashan
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
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  • even though
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