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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Nowadays, there are many cases where people visit places with tough living conditions
such
 as Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
However
, there are benefits and drawbacks for visitors who go to
such
 places. For instanse,
they can
an occurrence of something
instance
instances
 take photos of beautiful landscapes, observe an unusual animals and unique type of plants which looks bewitching. One of the benefits of visiting
such
 places is that they can get invaluable experience. By doing
this
 their worldview
is gettin
g wide and i
t
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wider
also
 helps them to get rid of stress, which leads to bad consequences.
In addition
, they can get acquainted with people of
this
 place and
also
 they have a chance of getting souvenirs, which are superb. The
second
 benefit is that they can obtain an unusual items from
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item
this
 area
such
 as a piece of rock which can be decoration
for some
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decorated
places at home.
Furthermore
,
for example
, if they go to Sahara des
ert, they hav
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the Sahara desert
e a chance to surf on the sand, which is one of the famous entertaini
ngs of
agreeably diverting
entertaining
this
 place. In conclusion, I should say that there are more benefits than drawbacks, they can take amazing photos of exotic animals and beautiful plants which can be found only in
this
 area. Even though there are difficult conditions, I think they will have a chance to get experience from
this
 kind of travelling.
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