You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Amber, I hope you are in the pink of your health. I received your letter
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week in which you asked me for interesting
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about India. Now I am glad to share with you the
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that is
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quite popular nowadays.
This
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is about the tallest “Statue of
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” which
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recently. Our P.M
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Narinder Modi dedicated to the nation 182-m tall statue of Sardar Vallabh Bhai Patel.
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figure attracts everyone all over the world because it is 2 times taller than
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of Liberty” in the U.S. Everyone in India feels proud to be an Indian. I
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appreciate the idea of
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Narinder Modi. It helps the local people with employees who live near that place. One thing that fascinates me most is that on 15 November 2018 Capture
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statue from space through satellite. I know after knowing
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you
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want to visit it. So, I am waiting for you when you will come to India we both will plan to travel
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to see the real beauty of a statue. See you soon and hope you are happy with
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update With love, Manpreet Kaur
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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