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People will never be willing to make the dramatic lifestyle changes needed to control climate change . For this reason, government must force people to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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No huge alters and modifications in the lifestyle of people will not be done by individuals to deal with major problems of humidity change. According to
this
, it is a "must" thing for the state to make them to do
this
. I completely agree with that obligation.
First
reason for t
Suggestion
The first reason
hat, I agree is that people cannot make assumptions to help the environment.
For example
, as now is being quarantined in my rustic there is
such
 a law that's going out or driving the car are prohibited in my home. The reason for
that is
 not giving the virus to develop and
also
 halting humidity changes in my rustic. People do not follow that rule of their own, only if ministry is included by fining the violations. The
second
 reason is that union must organize all types of litter bins on the roads of the city
such
 as for metals, plastics , pap
er
Accept space
,
s and so on, which can trigger pollution if do not so.
For example
, in my home there are warnings for people about not to litter or walk on the grass if there is
such
 situations they will be fined, but it is especially in well known districts of my city. I think it should be made all over the province to protect the world from humidity change. In conclusion, I think the best way to stop temperature change is forcing and fining people by authority if they do not follow the rules of the city.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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