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The internet is a great course of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world. Is all information reliable on internet? What could be done to control information online?

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It is true that the Internet has a wide range of
information
 and provides chances for people to be aware of the world.
Although
 the majority of
information
 on the Internet is not reliable, I believe that there are several trustworthy sources. In
this
 essay, I will focus on how to manipulate
information
 online.
First
 of all, as people from all over the world have access to the Internet, there
is
Suggestion
are
 a lot of data on the Internet which is reliable or not. Scammers can make up wrong
information
that is
 believed by some people.
This
 can lead them to make mistakes and affect their business detrimentally.
In contrast
, there
is
Suggestion
are
 some reliable sources on the Internet. That’s why, people should not doubt all the
information
 they see on the Internet. They have to be careful when they enter the websites,
such
 as verified or fake. To make
information
Suggestion
informed
 online more safety and
reliable
Suggestion
reliability
, there is a way. It is that the government should verify websites which provides
information
 or are related to news etc.
This
 can make it difficult to open websites and it may decrease fake
information
 sites on the Internet. In conclusion,
although
 there are some fake
information
 on the Internet, it can provide great opportunities for people as well.

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