What would happen to Earth if humans disappeared?

This
documentary shows from different aspects how would change the Earth without people. If humanity would disappear it couldn't be the end
for
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of
the world. Earth is the crucial part for people
Firstly
, we can notice how in the
first
day cars would be crashed and after few hours explode.
Moreover
, every part of the
cities
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city
would bombed by chemical emissions
,
Accept space
,
also
air pollution would effect on
animals
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animal
animals'
animal's
health. Factories would destroy themselves because nobody couldn't control their work.
Secondly
, animals would
suffering
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suffer
because of the starvation and their altitude for food.
However
, air pollution would increase a hundred times more, which shows how without human it would be
destroying
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destroyed
,
Accept space
,
but after few decades nature would clean and refresh
air
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the air
To sum up, all animals would be alive without animals and every part of the
cities
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city
would be filled
by
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with
water.
This
documentary shows how the Earth could be without us, but we couldn't
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