Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether or not international cooperation should tackle to the alarming issues has been a matter of debate since the beginning of the twenty-
first
century. While there are a lot of benefits of the international organization, I would
ague
present reasons and arguments
argue
that it is better to address some difficulties in its own country by the national cooperation. In the
first
place, there are some reasons to believe that global collaboration has responsibility for finding
solution
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a solution
to
emergency
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emerge
.
For instance
, global warming, natural disaster, infectious disease may have a negative impact on the global scale.
Therefore
, they usually require a lot of money from financial resource of worldwide organizations.
In addition
to that, the increasing world population is putting pressure on natural resources. Fossil fuels like oil and gas are running out, people are cutting down enormous areas of rainforest and destroying wildlife habitats. The international cooperation should introduce laws to limit emissions from factories, invest in renewable energy from solar, wind and
waterpower
Suggestion
water power
and natural areas and wild animals should be protected. In the
second
place, many kinds of urgent matters cannot be solved by international association but
also
by national assistances.
For example
, educational issues do not need action from other areas. If government can solve important problems like building educational system, having a good quality education, individuals will
also
trust in the government and have
obligation
Suggestion
an obligation
to themselves. The other reason is the distinct conditions of every country. As each nation has own difficulties related to culture, climate, politics,
Accept space
which can only tackle by their government. In conclusion,
although
international collaboration
bring
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brings
a great number of benefits to solve immediate matters on global scales, I believe that national organization should
also
contribute their
effort
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efforts
to improving these problems on the national scale.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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