The graph below shows the three different kinds of emission sources of greenhouse gas in the UK between 1990 and 2010.

Given is a graph reviewing collected data germane to three dissimilar emission sources of greenhouse gas in the UK through the span of two decades from 1990 to 2010. As per the graph, what is interesting to note is that emissions from gas witnessed gradual upward trend whereas, coal illustrated a downward trend. Oil saw fluctuation over the period. As for gas, over the whole period, gas showed a gradual escalation and the figure of the emissions from gas stood 210 thousand tons in 1990 and gained its peak at 310 bank tons in 2010. Turning to the details of coal, the emissions from coal tumbled markedly from roundly 310 lot tons to 190 sum tons over the two decades. When it comes to the emissions from oil, the figure experienced a fluctuation still 2000
however
, there was a slow decline in carbon emissions from 2000 to 2010 with 250 and 200 ton tons oil emissions, respectively.
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