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In many countries nowadays, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leave to study or work somewhere else. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?

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In today's world study and work, play an integral role in our lives.
Therefore in
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Therefore, in
 recent years, young unmarried people are choosing to live away from their parents to study or work.
This
 trend has both pros and cons.
However
, I believe that the advantages far outweigh the advantages. I shall present arguments to support my views in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, there are several benefits to live independently.
First
 and foremost, they can become more independent. As they make their decisions by themselves to any situation and will become able to handle difficulties and
consequently
 they would be more mature.
Secondly
, certain academic courses are not available everywhere.
Thus
, students have to go to other cities where they can acquire knowledge in the field of their choice.
Moreover
, it will reduce the financial pressure for families who have to pay their children's expenditure.
In addition
, it will
also
 reduce the conflicts between the young and their parents due to the generation gap and different views.
On the other hand
, there are certain drawbacks of staying away from home.
Firstly
, both the students and employees who are far away from their home, often feel lonely and they
also
 feel the lack of emotional support, love and care from their parents and
as a result
 they face many psychotic issues.
Moreover
, their lifestyle
also
 gets disturbed as they have to eat outside food and sometimes
this
 food is neither hygienic, nor healthy. To conclude, working and studying away from home has offered many opportunities.
Therefore
, I believe that
this
 trend has more advantages as compared to the disadvantages.

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