the maps below show the village of Stoke-ford in 1930 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the maps below show the village of Stoke-ford in 1930 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pictures illustrate the village of Stoke-ford between 1930 and 2010.
It is clear that
the change for 2010 involves the removal
ground
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to housing. In 1930, there
have
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farmland. The first area
located
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in the northeast
in
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the maps and the
second
location
on
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southwest
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on the maps. Shops and large house change to houses and retirement
home
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respectively. In 2010
besides
, the primary school have
the
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house near the school. The gardens
in
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1930 replace
to
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the way to go to a retirement home. The shops in 1930 involves removing to way and
have
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a lot of houses. The new road will
also
be built from the main road around
estate
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on the northeast. And the terrain of the southwest
have
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replace
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to
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the house. In the ways have a lot of houses around the way.
Finally
, no changes will be made to the primary school, post office, river stoke and the bridge.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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