The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.

The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.
These data sources clearly communicate how many journal
articles
read
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weekly by all
students
, PhD
students
and junior lecturers at a university in Australia.
Overall
, what stands out from the data is that the
students
studying
doctorates
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for doctorates
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read at least 12
articles
per week, more than all
students
and junior
students
. Looking
the
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chart with more details, the vast majority (75%) of undergraduates
reads
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1 to 4
articles
per week, compared to all
students
in
this
category
were
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slightly lower,
being
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65%.
In addition
, between 5 and 10
articles
read
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by undergraduates,
while
the figure for all
students
was higher
3
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%. For the
third
category, fewer PhD
students
spend 1 to 4 hours on reading than
two
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remaining categories, with the figure standing at 5% and 18% respectively. Meanwhile, around 77%
PhD
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students
spending
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11 hours or more at an Australian university,
whereas
there were only 5% and around 12% the number of
undergraduates
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the undergraduates
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and all
students
use
this
time for reading
articles
.
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