Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents.what is the reason for this?what problem can this cause?
Contemporary, working parents are increasing to compare with a few decades ago that have happened before the oil crisis or the bubble burst. Many families live far away from their parent's
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to own parents.
I have suggested two reasons a cause of increasing working parents. Use synonyms
Firstly
, a price has been increased is one of reason, Linking Words
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, school tuitions, foods and a housing roan etc. You could go to school cheaper than now. Linking Words
Therefore
, the mother has to work as father because they do not afford pay them with only father's wage. Despite the school tuitions are enormous amount of prices, they have to pay until a Linking Words
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Secondly
, women were advancing in society actively than a few decades ago. It was basic and typical thinking way that after got married women stay at Linking Words
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become house wives and look after a Linking Words
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, but it has changed along with the era. Because, a feminist manifesto has developed and women have attended equality of right. Now, working women is not an odd situation.
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However
, the children are likely to feel lonely and to want affection more. Perhaps, they may not talk about a daily occurrence or troubles. Linking Words
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the home
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did not know how to use it, but had curious.
To sum up, the parents have many reasons that to become working parents, but it is the truth that stays Use synonyms
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only children is exposed at dangerous situation. The parents need to recognize to children carefully and talking with them more than usual.Use synonyms
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