Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents.what is the reason for this?what problem can this cause?

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Contemporary, working parents are increasing to compare with a few decades ago that have happened before the oil crisis or the bubble burst. Many families live far away from their parent's
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, the parents cannot leave their
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to own parents. I have suggested two reasons a cause of increasing working parents.
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, a price has been increased is one of reason,
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, school tuitions, foods and a housing roan etc. You could go to school cheaper than now.
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, the mother has to work as father because they do not afford pay them with only father's wage. Despite the school tuitions are enormous amount of prices, they have to pay until a
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graduate to university.
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, women were advancing in society actively than a few decades ago. It was basic and typical thinking way that after got married women stay at
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home
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home, then
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become house wives and look after a
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, but it has changed along with the era. Because, a feminist manifesto has developed and women have attended equality of right. Now, working women is not an odd situation.
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, the children are likely to feel lonely and to want affection more. Perhaps, they may not talk about a daily occurrence or troubles.
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, a
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is staying at
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alone would suggest dangerous situations. If a
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could not discern whether the person is good or bad, the
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might let the person come to
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home
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the home
. What is more, a
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would burn if trying to cook or use the cooker because a
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did not know how to use it, but had curious. To sum up, the parents have many reasons that to become working parents, but it is the truth that stays
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only children is exposed at dangerous situation. The parents need to recognize to children carefully and talking with them more than usual.
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