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Some students find certain subjects, such as maths and philosophy, difficult. So, some people argue that these subjects should not be compulsory for all. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#students #subjects #maths #philosophy #people
The pie charts compare the highest level of
education
 achieved by women in
Someland
Suggestion
Some land
 across two years, 1945 and 1995. According to the pie charts, women received a much higher level of
education
 in 1995, than they did in 1945. In the
year
 1945, 35% of girls weren't going to school
in contrast
with
Suggestion
to
 the
year
 1995 when the percentage was 0. Throughout the
year
 1945, only 1% of women had completed their
first
degree
 of studies, no one their post-graduate and 35% their
third
degree
. Only 15% of females had done their sixth
year
 of studies, 10% their ninth
year
 and 4% their twelfth
year
. The situation had changed radically by 1995. In the
year
 1995, 50% of girls had finished their
first
degree
 in
education
, 20% their post-graduate and no one their
first
degree
. No one of
women
Suggestion
the women
 had completed their sixth and twelfth
year
 of studies. Just 10% of females had done their ninth
year
 of
education
.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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