Some British families decide not to buy televisions because they influence the development of the creativity of children. What do you think?

With the rapid development of science and
technology
,
television
, as a new invention in the 20th century is becoming very populous in people’s life. People can be informed of the latest news and enjoy the
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programs
at home. In my opinion,
television
will not affect
children
’s creativity as exaggerated.
Firstly
,
television
is the most effective tool to inform
children
of the latest news and scientific
development
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developments
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over the world.
Television
tells us
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recent development of some
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,
such
as clone
technology
, Genetic breakthroughs,
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new computing
technology
and so on, which can stimulate the imagination of
children
and encourage them to carry out relevant experiments, making new findings and breakthroughs in their study
Secondly
, some
programs
like adventures and geography can enlarge
children
’s
knowledge
of Scope. With the
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of information
technology
, the
knowledge
in textbooks cannot satisfy
Children
’s curiosity any more.
Children
need to learn wider
knowledge
and know more about our World.
Programs
like adventures can cultivate
children
’s creativity and the ability to tackle
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;
programs
like geography can teach
children
with
knowledge
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about knowledge
about different countries in the World and initiate their aspiration to know about
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nature;
programs
about science can inspire
Children
’s interest in science and
technology
.
However
, the improper
programs
on
television
sometimes play
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role in the growth of
Children
. The shots about violence, crimes and pornography contents are making
children
walk on The criminal road.
To sum up
, I believe that
television
will not influence
children
’s creativity.
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, the Government and the whole society should do their utmost to prohibit
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unhealthy
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on TV And provide
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children
with a clean growing environment.
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