Some people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better. Others see that having a friendly relations is better. what do you think? Discus both points and give us opinion.

Teachers play a vital role in shaping the future of any nation by teaching the students who are the building blocks. Many individuals argued that strict
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
of an instructor to keep learners petrified is an effective method while others do not.
This
essay will discuss
both
the views in detail and provide evidence that
both
stringent as well as amiable nature of
mentor
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the mentor
is better. To commence, advocates of stern educating method put
firth
forward in time or order or degree
forth
many arguments that
this
way of teaching helps to maintain classroom ethics. As, strict pedagogues may instill the degree of fear in schoolchildren's mind due to which pupils complete their homework on time, respect their professors, work hard, remain punctual and do not create
mess
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a mess
the mess
in the class.
Consequently
, they not only achieve decent grades because of their regularity in class and paying attention to their schoolwork but
also
become disciplined and organized individuals. Apart from
this
, instructing students in a lenient manner
,
Accept space
,
generally
,
Accept space
,
tend to be less efficient as it may hinder students to meet the deadlines as well as paying less attention to their studies.
In
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At
On
During
After
my graduation,
for instance
, my mathematics guide was too friendly and never punished us for late submission of assignments which affect my grades badly
in
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on
that subject in exams.
On the other hand
,
hard teaching method
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a hard teaching method
also have
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also has
some drawbacks.
Firstly
, losing
intetest
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
in the subject is the
principle
the original amount of a debt on which interest is calculated
principal
aspect of
tjis
denotes a person or thing
this
concept of because graduates usually struggle in absorbing
thr
definite article
the
their
through
lecture and afraid of
ask
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asking
questions from an arrogant teacher. In
othet
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
words, sharing and discussing problem due to
harsh attitude
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a harsh attitude
of college teacher lower the interest and performance of the students.
In contrast
, frank and polite guide improves collaboration among them. Due to
decent nature
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the decent nature
of professor scholars never scared to discuss their views. In that context, it is considered that students always want to work under a friendly mentor in project work. In conclusion, the above-mentioned information
provide
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provides
plausible arguments in favour of
both
views. I reiterate that the blend of
both
genial and strict methods could
ptoduce
bring forth or yield
produce
potentially favourable result
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potentially favourable results
a potentially favourable result
.

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