These days in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools.

A generation ago, teaching in a high school was considered an extremely well-respected and popular
job
, and in some countries
this
is still true.
However
, in many parts of the world, there has been a sharp drop in the number of young people who want to become high school teachers.
This
essay will look at the reasons for
this
and propose some solutions. One of the main causes of the
problem
is that teachers’ salaries are lower than many other jobs. Teachers’ pay has not kept pace with that of other professions,
such
as law or medicine. In the UK,
for example
, a doctor with five years’ experience will earn far more than a teacher with the same experience. The solution is for the government to raise teachers’ pay significantly, which would attract more people into the profession. Another
problem
is that many children do not behave well in class.
That is
to say, teachers often have to deal with pupils who disobey them, which often causes them to give up teaching.
This
tends to put off potential teachers as well. To tackle
this
issue, parents must give their children a sense of respect for teachers, in order to make children behave better in class. At
third
cause of the
problem
is that
teaches
a person whose occupation is teaching
teachers
often have too much work to do. Most teachers are snowed under with marking and paperwork, which means that they have to stay late at school and work at home in the evening.
As a result
, many teachers are tired and stressed, and their
job
has a negative effect on their family life. The way forward could be
to cut
Suggestion
cut
teachers’ hours, and to take on more teaching assistants, which would make teaching and easier
job
. To sum up, teaching has become a much less popular
job
in many countries, due to reasons
such
as the salary, the working hours and pupils’
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
This
is a serious
problem
, and unless we can get more talented young people to become teachers, the education of our children will suffer. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the
problem
lies with parents and the government.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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