some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty,while say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped .discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different
views whether
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views, whether
economic
growth
is merely one way to reduce
hunger
and
pverty
the state of having little or no money and few or no material possessions
poverty
or it is
main cause
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the main cause
a main cause
to spoil the
environment
.
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.
While some people consider that
environment
is being spoiled by rising economy and it should
definately
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
stop, I am with those who say that
hunger
and
stagerness
someone who supervises the physical aspects in the production of a show and who is in charge of the stage when the show is being performed
stagers
can only be stopped by economic
growth
.
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.
To commence with
,
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there are myriad reasons why masses believe that
econmoic
of or relating to an economy, the system of production and management of material wealth
economic
growth
is
major cause
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a major cause
the major cause
to spoil the
environment
so it ought be prohibited
.
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.
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The
prominent
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most prominent
reason of
this
is
advancement
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the advancement
of technology in terms of transport
.
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.
This
is because
,
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thesedays
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these days
, due to
advnet
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the advent
advent
of technology
,
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,
every person has
personal mode
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a personal mode
of transport
such
as cars and bikes
.
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.
They always use them for travelling or even short distances
,
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,
in other words
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,
individuals
are totally depend
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totally depend
on these things
.
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.
Since these things emit
harmfull
causing or capable of causing harm
harmful
gases
,
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,
it will pollute the
environment
.
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.
To
examplify
be characteristic of
exemplify
, USA is
world
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a world
top most
country
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countries
which has
highest economic
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the highest economic growth
growth
and development is respects of transportation as during the survey scientists witnessed that
USA
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the USA
is one of the that nations which creates 70% of pollution in every month
.
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.
Consequently
,
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,
in order to protect the
environment
steps need to be put by
authorities
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the authorities
. I along with those who say that merely way to end the
hunger
and
poverty
is the
growth
of
economy
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the economy
.
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.
I the contemporary world
,
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,
most of the developing countries which are facing the
hunger
and
poverty
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menses
menaces
minces
,
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,
owing to unemployment
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and
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And
literacy rate
.
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.
This
is because people are unable to earn the money for fulfilling their
bsic
pertaining to or constituting a base or basis
basic
needs and,
therefore they
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therefore, they
have to confront the
hungerness
a physiological need for food; the consequence of food deprivation
hungers
hunger's
nad
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and
also
due to
this
,
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,
people remain
uder
at a position directly lower than (with the subject just above)
under
the
poverty
line
.
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.
For example
,
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mpst
used to form the superlative
most
of
north
the region of the United States lying to the north of the Mason-Dixon line
North
koreans
of or relating to or characteristic of Korea or its people or language
Koreans
are facing
hungerness
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hunger
hungers
and
poverty
problems as the economy rate is
the lower
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lower
the lowest
. Eventually, if people get more job opportunities
ans
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
better education it will
definately
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
help to end
hunger
and
poverty
. To conclude, even though economic
growth
is
main cause
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the main cause
to spoil the
environment
by pollution
,
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,
I believe that economic
growth
can assist people to earn money for decreasing their
poverty
and
hungerness
a physiological need for food; the consequence of food deprivation
hungers
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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