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You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job

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Dear sir/madam, Your recent advertisement on a Monday article about claims executive is the job I was waiting
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 a year now. I am shekar looking for the job you've advertised and I have
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 the same role as you might require. I worked as a senior claims processor in a reputed company named Medibuddy where I managed to deal with multiple tasks like handling claims and a team of 6 members. I desperately feel that I fit for the post and I request you to consider my previous work experience that would support my profile to be apt for the post and I urge you to kindly arrange an interview to assess me personally once again. Your's sincerely Shekar

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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